Photography Drapes
Is this poem any good? Any criticisms?
the yellowing paper,is
draped in the sketch.
Midnight Summer ink and pencil,
drawn in a dash
of speed or something,
or inspiration
accuracy exceeding photography,
caging the flight of exultation,
the force of freedom.
the music of the road captivates and
entrances, and
the steady urgent
one-one-one-one-one
is the speed of power.
black to earth
back to earth
daytime starlight filters
grey stone dust
and on this side of the paper,
a sketch of a bicycle almost in motion
-energy suspended for eternity-
in blue ink and pencil is
almost seen
for an instant
this is absolubtly crap sorry but give up, its really dull
Fro Knows Las Vegas – Auto Drapes CRIBS
